Abby meets Javon a Vampire near a bar in Detroit when she smacks right into him There is an immediate attraction Abby is cautious but is immediately intrigued by him Javon has never been drawn to anyone like he is toward Abby He knows she is meant for him Can he convince her they are meant to be together as eternal mates.
Motor City Vampires Abby meets Javon a Vampire near a bar in Detroit when she smacks right into him There is an immediate attraction Abby is cautious but is immediately intrigued by him Javon has never been drawn to anyo
The reasons I chose to read this are obvious.I will try to remain impartial But after a childhood of never finding personalized pens with my name It is about time we see some around.There are a few issues I have with this story First, I appreciate that the author had a foreword mentioning she tries to prevent typos, but if you point out any to her she will correct them and publish a new edition However, this should not happen If you are thinking of publishing, find yourself an OCD friend and mak [...]
This was a really good first book I loved it Javon and Abby ran into each other outside of a club where she was meeting her BFF Jenny who cancelled on her to be with her boyfriend Javon knew that Abby was is mate the moment she ran into her Abby had know idea that Javon was a vamp and he didn t want to scare her off so he asked her out Abby who was self conscious and shy really liked him but she wanted to take things slow she thought he was to good to be true and she couldn t understand what he [...]
This was a complete let down A wonderful story completely destroyed by sub par writing that wouldn t grace a YA novella The dialogue was stilted and pathetic Editor s comments were left in with and without the corrections being made The love story was rushed and pointless, despite initial promise Abby is a good character and there was great potential for her to be the kind of heroine that people could relate to, but all those qualities were overshadowed by the author s need to have an immediate [...]
I actually really liked this book It s about a vampire, Javon and a human, Abby who fall in love with each other Granted it kinda seemed a little over the top that they fell in love with each other after a day but who can deny true loveI guess lol However, Javon has an enemy named Maurice who will stop nothing at ruining Javon I thought this book was rushed but I still really liked the story itself It was a little predictable but I still found that I couldn t put the book down I really enjoyed t [...]
Love thisI really loved this book it was crazy to hear cities I m near in the book I loved how things grew between javon and Abby this was such a great story I hope there is so I can see how things unfold.
2.50 StarsIt wasn t terrible but it did read like a B movie You could almost hear the bad acting The story line was pretty good But it needs a better editor
ARe freebie 1.75 starsARe book summary Abby meets Javon a Vampire near a bar in Detroit when she literally runs right into him There is an immediate attraction Javon knows Abby is the one for him, can he convince Abby he s the one for her too.Abby Montgomery bumps into Javon Bouvier while heading to a bar Since he s on the way to the same bar, they go together Abby s friend cancels their date at the last minute, and Javon conveniently steps in to keep her company Their attraction is instant and [...]
4 stars Vampire Romance with a Twist of Suspense and IntrigueAbby s Vampire is a good start to a new series, Motor City Vampires, by Anjela Renee There was enough background information provided to answer questions, but not so much that it detracted from the main story The use of flashbacks to explain past events and how those events shaped what was currently happening was handled beautifully.Abby is a single woman who works from home She tends to keep to herself and doesn t believe any man woul [...]
Vampire Romance with a Twist of Suspense and Intrigue.Abby s Vampire is a good start to a new series, Motor City Vampires, by Anjela Renee There was enough background information provided to answer questions, but not so much that it detracted from the main story The use of flashbacks to explain past events and how those events shaped what was currently happening was handled beautifully.Abby is a single woman who works from home She tends to keep to herself and doesn t believe any man would be in [...]
And my wild ride through suspiciously free e book content continuesThis time yeah, yeah, I m still at A in my alphabetically arranged free books which scares me than it surely scares you I got my hands on something longer than a short story which means it makes sense I came across some books which seemed just like beginning chapters and honestly, if the sequels are as short as the beginning books , it then makes them the most expensive books around if you pay a Dollar or per chapter, you do th [...]
The story starts off great, but then takes some really unrealistic turns for the human world Yes, I am well aware this is a paranormal book, but some of the occurrences in the human setting of the story are not believable Are we really suppose to believe someone can raise a window in a bedroom, enter said bedroom, and get behind the victim without making a sound I liked the relationship between Jovan and Abby, but after one date and a hot night of sex, the girl who isn t sure claims her undying [...]
I happened to finish this book so there s definitely something the author did right.The character had a good personality not a Mary Sue in anyway The story seems is interesting but seems rushed though and like everything was on fast forward and the sex scene,well was too much for a short books a short read and for some reasons you won t be able to drop it till you finish.I generally don t like a vampire story where they get married so I wish they didn t Javon was a vampire who fell in love with [...]
First let me say I liked it, truly earned 3 stars I did have a few things to mention Love is at first sight in this book and the really old vamps dont seem to have any elegance For example their blood getting is so newbie, I wish it had been elegant like Damian Salvatore with a wine glass I was surprised to read this descrepence in the book concerning Javons death Early in the book Javon says he was at a card game and another cheating player stabbed him outside Later when he is telling Abby of [...]
It was free so didn t SUCK but came close to it was just kind oflame,simple,predictable,strange,fake I guess you could say, the story was good it was just so rushed, like you can fall in love in one day well I mean you can but just sayingwould I read it again, well it was FREE so.
A great storyThis is a greAt story of a vampire who finds a man who was beat up and Bleeding out so she turned him so she can feed a nd saves him but she sThis is a great story of a Vampire who across a man who was beaten up and losing blood and she needs to feed so she changes him, he s now a Vampire also, it s a great story once you start reAding it you so my won t want to stop
If you have seen a soft porn flick you know the style of this book Motor City Vampires 1 is written in awkward language that fails to engage the reader in the poorly spun plot within the equally unenthralling story line In fact the writing reminds of something written by an elementary school student at least the lines between the sex scenes, which also fail to arouse the readers interest Not for me
This was a let down.I tried to like this book, I really did It actually had potential, but in the end, it was just bad.There were editing errors editing notes accidentally left in text The dialogue was stilted and odd I must say that the writing was amateurish I do not generally pick on author s style or ability, but in this case I could come up with no other word to describe it better.
I had some issues with a few things in this story but I felt it has so much potential that I really wanted so much of and from it I thought the author has done a great job with what she has created but there is a lot left to be desired I really hope that there is a revised version that will come out and blow this publication out of the water.
Abby s Vampire rules Abby was stood up by her best friend on their girls night out It was probably the best and the worst thing that s ever happened to her She meets the love of her life Javon But Javon has one little secret he s hiding from Abby and this secret has her being hunted by an old enemy from Javons past.
I m going to say this books is just average I liked the idea of the story, the whole love and first sight is always used There needed to be romance, and the story between Javon and Maurice was lacking I liked all of the characters, so I will read the next book with fingers crossed that the story is alittle better.
The hold of loveThis was a really good book I enjoyed the storyline between Abby and Jovan At the same time I loved the mystery behind Maurice This has the makings of a good series
MehVery choppy It had too many characters and it wasn t long enough to give each one enough back story The main character is like I m a vampire and the other is like omg Then okay love you in one page It was free.
the story was ok but too many parts got left out or just skipped over one minute they would be talking the next they are waking up and its a week later and you have to assume what happens in between.
Making headwayI liked the story of the girl who didn t know her own worth It makes me realize how many women out there don t see themselves appropriately Javon was patient and loving I really enjoyed this cute story
The best thing I can say about this book is that I actually finished it.This book had so much potential in terms of storyline, but it was decimated by a juvenile writing style and poor editing And I will limit my comments to that.
This book had the potential to be a good story Vampire meets girl, they fall in love, bad guys after girl etc Unfortunately the book was horribly written Nothing was realistic, and everything felt stage The conversations in the book were written like am elementary school book.
Wonderful new series, a little simplified at certain areas Looking forward to Enri s story.
Abby s vampireAbby s vampire is a awesome read just loved it It s got it all love, danger, an some really hot sex
It was a lovely story Slightly different from other paranormal books I read This had a sweetness to it Would recommend to young adult
Great Read I was intrigued when I first started this story, now I want to read in this series Can t wait to read the next book in this series.